tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2703851674618819701.post2970480052099581573..comments2011-12-08T16:32:27.559-08:00Comments on Paul Kisling: KCAI ANIM: Hunting & Gathering Project, PART 1Paul Kislinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16426266618552119467noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2703851674618819701.post-40735604241583935092010-09-02T16:15:55.797-07:002010-09-02T16:15:55.797-07:00Concept:
The content of both images is solid. With...Concept:<br />The content of both images is solid. With the content of the bridge image being the strongest.<br /><br />Composition:<br />Both compositions work, but again, the bridge image is more successful due mostly to greater variation in line weight and the use of perspective. There's also more visual interest and implied narrative in this image.<br /><br />Detail/execution:<br />The dorm room image is flat. Mostly due to a diffuse line weight. Objects in the foreground share the same plain as objects in the background. There is also no tonality present, which strips meaning and atmosphere from the image...no sense of light. The bridge image goes further and actually does create a mood. However, the gradation from dark to light is trapped a little in the middle of the spectrum. The attention to detail and texture is pretty good, but could be more consistent throughout the image. <br /><br />Following instruction:<br />ExcellentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2703851674618819701.post-19300505550162217082010-08-31T00:56:33.589-07:002010-08-31T00:56:33.589-07:00Yeah! I agree! But I'm gonna actually use the ...Yeah! I agree! But I'm gonna actually use the Liberty Memorial as my favorite place here in a bit. Hopefully then I'll be alright.Paul Kislinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04088289037146164439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2703851674618819701.post-69432939011304447952010-08-30T21:51:21.486-07:002010-08-30T21:51:21.486-07:00If you shade some parts in the distance a little b...If you shade some parts in the distance a little bit darker, It'll help pop some things out and create a bigger separation of space. Right now it looks a bit flat.<br /><br />Nice sense of space and soft shading in your second piece.Wenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08407818378485459214noreply@blogger.com